Opening scene: 1
Scene 1
A mixed race boy of 11 to 15yrs, is sitting on a chair in a white room {sitting causal but leaning forward}. Talking to a camera.
Re: Hawk and Dove. Who they was.
His life and the normal life he was living because of their actions.
Scene 1 Alt.
Opening 1
Two children sitting on stairs watching the TV. (Though the stairs)
Family in the living room.
Mum (big ol mama) goes to the fridge to take out drinks for granddads playing domino’s round a table
{One of the old men receives a call on his mobile, gets up and goes away} (Focus on men and Jokes coming from them. For about a Minute-2
Zoom back to children getting louder
Cut back to domino table one of the granddad’s raise an eye lid momma notices. Without missing a beat of what she was doing.
Cut back to momma kicking up a slipper from her foot into her hand and throwing it, all in one move, It bounces off the door frame goes though the bannisters hits both the children bounces off the wall goes back though the stair banister and drops at mommas feet to the ground just momma comes to the door gap.
Momma says “BED”
Both children look at each other then run up stairs.
{The idea of the scene is that you know it’s funny but you dismiss the idea, that there is no way that the slipper should have hit the kids. but retain this info for later}
Narrator says.
“Funny thing you don’t notice as children”.
Scene 2
Pans
To the front window, to an Indian lady mid way down the road. Walking away from the house. There is a knock on the door then the door opens (a big white woman comes in mid 30’s (.......... ..............).
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